Micah flew to the moon in his new rocket ship.
But when he landed, he was in for a big surprise!
when he got there there was no one around when he got
out of his rocket ship he was floating he could do anything.
He wanted to go on the moon but he couldn't because he
was floating he couldn't move he couldn’t run or walk.
He did get on the moon at last but he had to go back to land.
When he was going back to land he saw another rocket
going to the moon so he said that he didn't want to go back
to the moon so he could see what the other man was doing
so he jammed out of his rocket ship.
Wow Khan! What an amazing story line you have created... it goes on and on and on across my screen and out into space! I love the huge moon in the background. Will Micah ever come back to earth?
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ReplyDeleteGreat story Kahn, but like Rachel and Valmai, it was tricky to read because it went right across the screen. I like the choice of photos that you used, wouldn't it be exciting to blast into space in a rocket ship, and to float about.